Re: [Capwap] CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E2

OK with me, pending on the respective changes being having been made
correctly. 

Dan

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Pat Calhoun (pacalhou) [mailto:pcalhoun@cisco.com] 
> Sent: Wednesday, June 18, 2008 3:56 PM
> To: capwap@frascone.com
> Subject: [Capwap] CAPWAP IESG Review Comment E2
> 
> All,
> 
> The IESG Comment is as follows:
> 
> E2 - A number of editorial problems have been detected when 
> running idnits. Please fix them:
> 
> ------------------
> 
>   Checking nits according to
> http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
>  
> --------------------------------------------------------------
> ----------
> ----
> 
>   == No 'Intended status' indicated for this document; 
> assuming Proposed
>      Standard
> 
> 
>   Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
>  
> --------------------------------------------------------------
> ----------
> ----
> 
>      No issues found here.
> 
>   Miscellaneous warnings:
>  
> --------------------------------------------------------------
> ----------
> ----
> 
>   == Using lowercase 'not' together with uppercase 'MUST' is 
> not an accepted
>      usage according to RFC 2119.  Please use 'MUST NOT' (if 
> that is what you
>      mean).
>      
>      Found 'MUST not' in this paragraph:
>      
>      Unless otherwise specified, a control message that lists a set of
>      supported (or expected) message elements MUST not expect 
> the message
>      elements to be in any specific order.  The sender MAY 
> include the message
>      elements in any order.  Unless otherwise noted, one 
> message element of
>      each type is present in a given control message.
> 
> 
>   Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
>  
> --------------------------------------------------------------
> ----------
> ----
> 
>      (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using 
> normative references
>      to lower-maturity documents in RFCs)
> 
>   == Missing Reference: 'ChangeCipherSpec' is mentioned on 
> line 1456, but not
>      defined
> '[ChangeCipherSpec]...'
> 
>   == Unused Reference: 'RFC2132' is defined on line 6048, but 
> no explicit
>      reference was found in the text
>      '[RFC2132]  Alexander, S. and R. Droms, "DHCP Options 
> and BOOTP Vendo...'
> 
>   ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 3280 (Obsoleted by RFC 5280)
> 
>   ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2434 (Obsoleted by RFC 5226)
> 
>   ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 1883 (Obsoleted by RFC 2460)
> 
>   -- Unexpected draft version: The latest known version of 
>      draft-calhoun-dhc-capwap-ac-option is -00, but you're 
> referring to -02.
> 
>   -- Possible downref: Normative reference to a draft: ref.
>      'I-D.calhoun-dhc-capwap-ac-option'  (No intended status 
> found in state
>      file of draft-calhoun-dhc-capwap-ac-option)
> 
>   == Outdated reference: draft-housley-aaa-key-mgmt has been 
> published as RFC
>      4962
> ----------------------------
> 
> I have made the necessary changes to address all of the issues.
> 
> PatC
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