[Cbor] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on charter-ietf-cbor-01-01: (with COMMENT)

[Alvaro Retana via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-cbor-01-01: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I have a couple of editorial suggestions:

(1) The charter talks about "using a DISPATCH like process".  While most people
might have an idea of what that is, I think mentioning it is not necessary.

(2) The first category is:

   General purpose specifications that are expected to have broad usage: The
   working group will normally adopt and publish such proposals. Examples of
   proposals in this category are CBOR Sequence media type
   (draft-bormann-cbor-sequence) and Error Indications tag
   (draft-richter-cbor-error-tag).

It would be nice if the examples of WG adoption were adopted documents.  I
think the description is enough -- let the WG decide if these are this type of
documents.

(3) Similarly, in the third category... "An example of this might be portions
of draft-bormann-cbor-tags-oid..."  The tentative language is not great, even
for an example.