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[CCAMP] AD review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-signal-type-subregistry

"BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com> Wed, 27 January 2016 17:30 UTC

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From: "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com>
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Subject: [CCAMP] AD review of draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-signal-type-subregistry
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CCAMP,

In doing my AD review of this draft, I found the IANA Considerations section confusing and have returned the draft to the WG. To have both Standards Action and IETF Review specified is an overlap. I've discussed with your Chairs and they have a proposal to discuss with you. I would hope this is non-controversial and can be done quickly (can be a shortened WG Last Call) and we can get on with publishing the document.

When fixing, I recommend removing one of the two paragraphs from the Introduction as they are duplicates. It's ok the draft is short and to the point. As this draft is forward looking for the registry, it would be best to generalize vs. repeating text from the other draft on Sup43, so I recommend removing the 1st paragraph and keeping the second paragraph (with some tweaks).

Thanks,
Deborah

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