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tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Fri, 16 June 2023 07:41 UTC

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From: CCAMP <ccamp-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
Sent: 15 June 2023 13:00
From: CCAMP <ccamp-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian=40huawei.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
Sent: 13 June 2023 17:26

This starts a 2 weeks working group last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-mw-topo-yang-05. The last call ends on Tuesday June 28th. Please indicate your support or concern to the mailing list. Review comments and nits are also welcome.

All the IPR declarations from authors and contributors have been collected. Please note that no IPR was disclosed against this draft.

<tp2>
One more thought.  The Appendices would benefit from a reference to RFC8792.

TomPetch


<tp>
8561 is an import so must be a Normative reference

  "ETSI EN 302 217-1 -
  "ETSI EN 301 129   -
need adding as references as a URL so I can see if they are accessible

1.1
should include
ctp
rlt
rltp
snir
IMHO

carries, in various configurations/modes.  T
perhaps 'carriers'

.  The supporting carriers are identified by its termination points
/its/their/

s.3.3
L2 ethernet
Is there an Ethernet that is a different layer?

s.3.4
augmented by the microwave topology model
a reference would be useful

module
snir
            fraction-digits 1;
            range "0..99";
I imagine that that excludes 99.9 or 99.1 etc

actual transmitted level
ditto

when choices specify mw-tp mw-link is one of the choice mandatory?

apply only for networks with an          microwave network topology type
/an/a/

A.1
10.10.10.1
is not an address for documentation use

A.2
dirro

B.1
ditto


   The authors would like to thank ...


HTH
Tom Petch
We are also looking for shepherd of this document, please feel free to volunteer (authors excluded), thanks.

Best wishes,
Haomian & Chairs


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