Re: [CCAMP] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

["Daniele Ceccarelli (dceccare)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Eric,

We might still have some room for changing, but what I would suggest is to be congruent with RFC 8776 and RFC 9093.
A small summary for you.

- RFC 8776 defines common data types for Traffic engineering and it's called: Common YANG Data Types for Traffic Engineering
- RFC 9093 defined common data types for L0 networks and it's called: A YANG Data Model for Layer 0 Types
- this draft defined common data types for L1 networks and it's called: A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types

Given that we're working on RFC 9093 bis, we might change it's title as well.

Do you think that the title of RFC8776 sounds better? We could reuse it in this draft and something along the lines of: Common YANG data types for L1 networks.

Would this work?

Cheers
Daniele  

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From: Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <[e-mail]> 
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Hello Italo,

Thanks for your reply and some actions. Nevertheless, I still find that the draft title is really misleading.

As the authors, the CCAMP WG/AD, and the IETF Last Call think that it is not confusing, then I am balloting an ABSTAIN in the coming minutes.

Regards

-éric

On 14/02/2024, 14:17, "Italo Busi" <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:


Dear Eric, 


Thank you for the review, the authors have updated the document to address your comments and posted the updated document as draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-17 


Updates include:


- Added clarification text for "Layer 1" networks to avoid confusion of the Title
- Expanded the Security and highlighted that write operations without proper protection can have a negative effect on network operations


Again, thanks for the support and review. 


Authors, Haomian and Italo.


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> DISCUSS:
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> # Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for raft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16
> 
> Thank you for the work put into this document. As I am not an optical 
> expert, I have only reviewed the overall structure.
> 
> Please find below one blocking DISCUSS points (easy to address), and 
> one non-blocking COMMENT point.
> 
> Special thanks to Daniel King for the shepherd's detailed write-up 
> including the WG consensus *and* the justification of the intended status.
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> Other thanks to Dirk Von Hugo, the Internet directorate reviewer (at 
> my request), please consider this int-dir review:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16-int
> dir- 
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16-in
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> telechat-von-hugo-2023-12-09/
> (even if only nits, it would be nice to see a reply from the authors)
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> I hope that this review helps to improve the document,
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> Regards,
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> -éric
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> # DISCUSS (blocking)
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> <https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/>, a DISCUSS ballot is a request to have a discussion on the following topics:
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> ## Layer 1 vs. OTN
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> The I-D title and the abstract first sentence (as well as CCAMP 
> charter) are
> misleading: it is *not* about generic layer-1 but only about a very 
> specific
> one: OTN. I.e., the content does not match the wrapping, please update 
> the title and the abstract.
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> Obviously, this is not a DISCUSS level point but I want to get a 
> discussion with the authors and the responsible AD(s) before clearing 
> my ballot to either NoObj (if the scope is changed) or to abstain (if 
> text/title is unchanged).
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> COMMENT:
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> # COMMENTS (non-blocking)
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> ## Section 7
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> Should the writable data nodes be listed with the associated security 
> vulnerabilities ? Per 
> https://wiki.ietf.org/group/ops/yang-security-guidelines 
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