Re: [CCAMP] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8632 (5953)

Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com> Thu, 23 January 2020 17:45 UTC

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From: Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>
To: stefan vallin <stefan@wallan.se>, Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>, "rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8632 (5953)
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Agree, please reject the errata.
Thanks,

Daniele  

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From: stefan vallin <stefan@wallan.se> 
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Cc: BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A <db3546@att.com>om>; aretana.ietf@gmail.com;
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<daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>om>; Fatai Zhang <zhangfatai@huawei.com>om>;
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Subject: Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8632 (5953)

Hi,
Agree with Martin,  the RFC text is correct.
/stefan


> On 5 Jan 2020, at 20:55, Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> The original text is correct.  It is intended to examplify how the 
> severity can change multiple times over the lifecycle of an alarm.
> 
> 
> /martin
> 
> 
> RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8632, "A YANG 
>> Data Model for Alarm Management".
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=0fdf46ff-530b4e56-0fdf0664-865b
>> 3b1e120b-376d6dc7ba88e18e&q=1&e=70d03ff9-f587-4bcc-b5dd-cbaac0bd7a9f&
>> u=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Ferrata%2Feid5953
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Editorial
>> Reported by: Tetsuya Hasegawa <te.hasegawa2@gmail.com>
>> 
>> Section: 3.5.1.
>> 
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>>   From a resource perspective, an alarm can, for example, have the
>>   following lifecycle: raise, change severity, change severity, 
>> clear,
>> 
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>>   From a resource perspective, an alarm can, for example, have the
>>   following lifecycle: raise, change severity, clear,
>> 
>> Notes
>> -----
>> 
>> 
>> Instructions:
>> -------------
>> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please 
>> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. 
>> When a decision is reached, the verifying party can log in to change 
>> the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC8632 (draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-09)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : A YANG Data Model for Alarm Management
>> Publication Date    : September 2019
>> Author(s)           : S. Vallin, M. Bjorklund
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Common Control and Measurement Plane
>> Area                : Routing
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>