Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05.txt> (A framework for Management and Control of microwave and millimeter wave interface parameters) to Informational RFC

["Yemin (Amy)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,



We just updated the draft, https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/.

Your comments are addressed in the latest version.

You can find the detail changes to your comments inline below.



BR,

Amy

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I wonder what

   [I-D.ahlberg-ccamp-microwave-radio-link]

an Informative reference to an expired I-D from 2016 containing little more than a YANG module, adds that

   [I-D.ietf-ccamp-mw-yang]

a fully fledged I-D, in WG Last Call, with very similar data structures and accompanying text, does not provide.  I am puzzled to read

"   The recommendation is to use the structure of the IETF: Radio Link

   Model [I-D.ahlberg-ccamp-microwave-radio-link] as the starting point, "

when a more recently worked on I-D is available.

[Amy] remove the reference to [I-D.ahlberg-ccamp-microwave-radio-link], and replace with [I-D.ietf-ccamp-mw-yang].



The I-D includes MUST and must, SHOULD and should, but no reference to RFC8174; I think that this needs a further look.

[Amy] add reference to RFC8174.



The normatively referenced RFC7223 and RFC7277 have both been superseded by I-Ds that have been around for quite a while while rfc8022bis is well on its way to superseding the referenced RFC8022..

[Amy] update the reference to the latest RFCs.



Tom Petch





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> The IESG has received a request from the Common Control and

Measurement Plane

> WG (ccamp) to consider the following document: - 'A framework for

Management

> and Control of microwave and millimeter

>    wave interface parameters'

>   <draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05.txt> as Informational RFC

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> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits

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> Abstract

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>    The unification of control and management of microwave radio link

>    interfaces is a precondition for seamless multilayer networking and

>    automated network provisioning and operation.

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>    This document describes the required characteristics and use cases

>    for control and management of radio link interface parameters using

a

>    YANG Data Model.

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>    The purpose is to create a framework for identification of the

>    necessary information elements and definition of a YANG Data Model

>    for control and management of the radio link interfaces in a

>    microwave node.  Some parts of the resulting model may be generic

>    which could also be used by other technologies.

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> The file can be obtained via

> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/

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> IESG discussion can be tracked via

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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/ba

llot/

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> No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.

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