Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05.txt> (A framework for Management and Control of microwave and millimeter wave interface parameters) to Informational RFC

["t.petch" <[e-mail]>]

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From: "Yemin (Amy)" <[e-mail]>
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> Hi Tom,
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> We just updated the draft,
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/.
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> Your comments are addressed in the latest version.

Yes, my comments have been addressed

Tom Petch


> You can find the detail changes to your comments inline below.
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> BR,
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> Amy
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: tom p. [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Tuesday, April 10, 2018 11:36 PM
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> Subject: Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05.txt>
(A framework for Management and Control of microwave and millimeter wave
interface parameters) to Informational RFC
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> I wonder what
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>    [I-D.ahlberg-ccamp-microwave-radio-link]
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> an Informative reference to an expired I-D from 2016 containing little
more than a YANG module, adds that
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>    [I-D.ietf-ccamp-mw-yang]
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> a fully fledged I-D, in WG Last Call, with very similar data
structures and accompanying text, does not provide.  I am puzzled to
read
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> "   The recommendation is to use the structure of the IETF: Radio Link
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>    Model [I-D.ahlberg-ccamp-microwave-radio-link] as the starting
point, "
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> when a more recently worked on I-D is available.
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> [Amy] remove the reference to
[I-D.ahlberg-ccamp-microwave-radio-link], and replace with
[I-D.ietf-ccamp-mw-yang].
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>
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> The I-D includes MUST and must, SHOULD and should, but no reference to
RFC8174; I think that this needs a further look.
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> [Amy] add reference to RFC8174.
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>
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> The normatively referenced RFC7223 and RFC7277 have both been supersed
ed by I-Ds that have been around for quite a while while rfc8022bis is
well on its way to superseding the referenced RFC8022..
>
> [Amy] update the reference to the latest RFCs.
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>
>
> Tom Petch
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> ----- Original Message -----
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> From: "The IESG"
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> Sent: Friday, April 06, 2018 8:20 PM
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> Subject: Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05.txt> (A
framework for Management and Control of microwave and millimeter wave
interface parameters) to Informational RFC
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> > The IESG has received a request from the Common Control and
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> Measurement Plane
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> > WG (ccamp) to consider the following document: - 'A framework for
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> Management
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> > and Control of microwave and millimeter
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> >    wave interface parameters'
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> >   <draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-05.txt> as Informational RFC
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> > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and
solicits
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> final
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> > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
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> > Abstract
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> >    The unification of control and management of microwave radio link
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> >    interfaces is a precondition for seamless multilayer networking
and
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> >    automated network provisioning and operation.
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> >
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> >    This document describes the required characteristics and use
cases
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> >    for control and management of radio link interface parameters
using
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> a
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> >    YANG Data Model.
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> >    The purpose is to create a framework for identification of the
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> >    necessary information elements and definition of a YANG Data
Model
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> >    for control and management of the radio link interfaces in a
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> >    microwave node.  Some parts of the resulting model may be generic
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> >    which could also be used by other technologies.
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> > The file can be obtained via
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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/
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> > IESG discussion can be tracked via
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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework/ba
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> llot/
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> > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
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