Re: [CCAMP] Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16: (with COMMENT)

[Italo Busi <[e-mail]>]

Dear Martin, 

Thank you for the review, the authors have updated the document to address your comments and posted the updated document as draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-17.

Updates include:

- Expanded acronyms on first use. 
- Added clarification text for "Layer 1" networks

Again, thanks for the support and review. 

Authors, Haomian and Italo.

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> Please expand acronyms on first use -- it is much more readable if reader's
> don't have to dig up references and only costs a few words. For example:
> OTN<
> ODU, HO, LSP, LO.
> 
> It would be useful to precisely define what you mean by "Layer 1" networks,
> which I gather is the physical layer. Or is this about optically switched
> networks, specifically? If so, it would be better to name things accordingly. I
> don't know much about this but it appears that any non-optical Layer 1
> network
> (if such a thing exists) is not represented in this YANG module.
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