Re: [CCAMP] Comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-05
"Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)" <giomarti@cisco.com> Wed, 13 March 2013 23:50 UTC
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From: "Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)" <giomarti@cisco.com>
To: "Margaria, Cyril (NSN - DE/Munich)" <cyril.margaria@nsn.com>
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-05
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Hi Cyril, thx for careful review, pls see inline On Mar 13, 2013, at 10:20 , "Margaria, Cyril (NSN - DE/Munich)" <cyril.margaria@nsn.com> wrote: > > Dear authors, > > I have the following comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-05: > > Comment 1: > The document considers bidirection RB set and limit 2 RBInformation per hop. However per RFC3473 section 8.1.1 and RFC3471, using different interface id for the upstream and downstream direction. The current definition does not support that. > The following change would allow it. > Section 4.2 > > OLD: > "If more than two objects are encountered, two > MUST be processed and the rest SHOULD be ignored." > > NEW: > "If more than two objects per direction are encountered, two > MUST be processed and the rest SHOULD be ignored." > GM> ok > Section 4 > > OLD: > "The usage of <WSON Processing> object for the bidirectional case is > the same as per unidirectional. When an intermediate node uses > information from this object to instruct a node about wavelength > regeneration, the same information applies to both downstream and > upstream directions." > > NEW: > "The usage of <WSON Processing> object for the bidirectional case is > the same as per unidirectional. When an intermediate node uses > information from this object to instruct a node about wavelength > regeneration, the same regeneration information should applies to both downstream and > upstream directions." GM> I assume you meant section 5. Ok. Just wondering if worth spending some words on usage of I|E flags vs directions > > Comment-2: Section 4.2 : > I think the restriction on the RB Set identifier processing is maybe too strong. > I would like to suggest the following modification: > > remove > "RB Set Field MAY contain more than one RB Indetifier. Only the first > one MUST be processed, the others SHOULD be ignored. > " > In all case, consider the Typo GM> fine with me no problem in relaxing constrain (btw thx for catching the typo) > Comment-3 : > The restriction on the OIC and other parameters are also too strong, only considering one does not allows signaling to pick the one RB among several. > Please consider the following change > Remove > " The Optical Interface Class List, Input Bit Range List and > Processing Capability List MAY contain more than one element. Only > the first MUST be processed, the others SHOULD be ignored. > " > GM> same as comment above thx again for reading! Cheers G > > > > Mit freundlichen Grüßen / Best Regards > Cyril Margaria > > Nokia Siemens Networks Optical GmbH > St.Martin-Str. 76 > D-81541 München > Germany > mailto:cyril.margaria@nsn.com > Phone: +49-89-5159-16934 > Fax: +49-89-5159-44-16934 > ---------------------------------------------------------------- > Nokia Siemens Networks Optical GmbH > Geschäftsleitung / Board of Directors: Gero Neumeier, Dr. Rolf Nauerz > Sitz der Gesellschaft: München / Registered office: Munich > Registergericht: München / Commercial registry: Munich, HRB 197143 > > > > _______________________________________________ > CCAMP mailing list > CCAMP@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp
- [CCAMP] Comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signali… Margaria, Cyril (NSN - DE/Munich)
- Re: [CCAMP] Comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-sig… Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)
- Re: [CCAMP] Comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-sig… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] Comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-sig… Margaria, Cyril (NSN - DE/Munich)
- Re: [CCAMP] Comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-sig… Margaria, Cyril (Coriant - DE/Munich)