[CCAMP] AD Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Mon, 30 October 2023 01:30 UTC

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Subject: [CCAMP] AD Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16
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Hi!

I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16 and am taking over as responsible AD of this document to help load-balance work in the RTG Area.

Thank you for the work on this document.  The early review by RTGDIR (Michael Richardson) and YANGDOCTORS (Rob Wilton) are also appreciated.  This document is in good shape.  I having no feedback of substance so I'm advancing it to IETF LC.

The only editorial feedback I have is from idnits:

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC8294' is defined on line 1992, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

Thanks,
Roman