Re: [CCAMP] AD Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16

Italo Busi <Italo.Busi@huawei.com> Wed, 14 February 2024 14:00 UTC

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To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, "ccamp@ietf.org" <ccamp@ietf.org>
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Dear Roman, 

Thank you for the review, the authors have updated the document to address your comments and posted the updated document as draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-17.

We have added a reference to RFC8294 in table 1

Again, thanks for the support and review. 

Authors, Haomian and Italo.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
> Sent: lunedì 30 ottobre 2023 02:30
> To: ccamp@ietf.org
> Subject: [CCAMP] AD Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16
> 
> Hi!
> 
> I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16 and am taking
> over as responsible AD of this document to help load-balance work in the
> RTG Area.
> 
> Thank you for the work on this document.  The early review by RTGDIR
> (Michael Richardson) and YANGDOCTORS (Rob Wilton) are also appreciated.
> This document is in good shape.  I having no feedback of substance so I'm
> advancing it to IETF LC.
> 
> The only editorial feedback I have is from idnits:
> 
>   == Unused Reference: 'RFC8294' is defined on line 1992, but no explicit
>      reference was found in the text
> 
> Thanks,
> Roman