Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types) to Proposed Standard

Dear Tom, 

Thank you for the review, the authors have updated the document to address your comments and posted the updated document as draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-17.

For clarity we have included the proposed resolution for each issue identified in the text below [Haomian & Italo].

Again, thanks for the support and review. 

Authors, Haomian and Italo.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
> Sent: mercoledì 15 novembre 2023 10:50
> To: last-call@ietf.org
> Cc: rdd@cert.org; ccamp-chairs@ietf.org; ccamp@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ccamp-
> layer1-types@ietf.org; daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com
> Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> (A
> YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types) to Proposed Standard
> 
> Here are some more comments on this I-D.  My earlier  comments I have
> retained at the end.  Again, not a proper review.
> 
> YANG module
> 
> description
> /Layer 1 types/ Layer 1 YANG types/
> or perhaps
>  A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types
> 

[Haomian & Italo] Fixed as " Layer 1 YANG types "

> bandwidth scientific notation
> is the canonical form lower case?
> 

[Haomian & Italo] Yes

> I like to view the Normative References but think that here I cannot because
> they are subscription only.  This issue came up before but I cannot
> remember what the conclusion was and things may have moved on since
> then.
> 
> ANSI I have never been able to access - subscription only I think.
> 
> ITU-T I have had problems with in the past but I now seem to have access
> (but they could do with lessons from the datatracker about searching = I
> really do not want 11587 hits for G.709!)
> 
> IEEE I used to be able to access but now struggle - the website has moved
> and been 'improved'.  The URL in the HTML version of the I-D work but tell
> me that I do not have access.  802,3 I have previously downloaded and
> printed but seemingly no more.  Online viewing such a large document I find
> time consuming.
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> 
> From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
> Sent: 10 November 2023 11:15
> 
> Some time ago ago I had this at my fingertips but no more:-(
> 
> I may find time for a proper review but did note, so far,
> 
> ISO/IEC C99 is in the I-D but not the I-D References
> 

[Haomian & Italo] Added reference with URL (requires subscription)

> IEEE Std 754-2008: is in the I-D but the references have -2019; this topic is
> fraught - it may be that the  older one is wanted here
> 

[Haomian & Italo] Reference updated to IEEE 754-2019

> ANSI T1.105-1995: is in the I-D but the references have 2001
> 

[Haomian & Italo] Reference updated to ANSI T1.105-2001

> p.5 'section Section'
> 

[Haomian & Italo] Fixed

> p.7 several should that might be SHOULD
> 

[Haomian & Italo] Fixed

> Tom Petch
> 
> ________________________________________
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> Subject: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> (A YANG
> Data Model for Layer 1 Types) to Proposed Standard
> 
> 
> The IESG has received a request from the Common Control and
> Measurement Plane WG (ccamp) to consider the following document: - 'A
> YANG Data Model for Layer
> 1 Types'
>   <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> as Proposed Standard
> 
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
> comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-
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> 
> Abstract
> 
> 
>    This document defines a collection of common data types and groupings
>    in the YANG data modeling language for use with layer 1 networks.
>    These derived common types and groupings are intended to be imported
>    by modules that specify OTN networks, such as topology, tunnel,
>    client signal adaptation and service.
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> The file can be obtained via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types/
> 
> 
> 
> No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
> 
> 
> The document contains these normative downward references.
> See RFC 3967 for additional information:
>     draft-ietf-teas-rfc8776-update: Common YANG Data Types for Traffic
> Engineering (None - Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF))
> 
> 
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