Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types) to Proposed Standard

Here are some more comments on this I-D.  My earlier  comments I have retained at the end.  Again, not a proper review.

YANG module

description
/Layer 1 types/ Layer 1 YANG types/
or perhaps
 A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types

bandwidth scientific notation
is the canonical form lower case?

I like to view the Normative References but think that here I cannot because they are subscription only.  This issue came up before but I cannot remember what the conclusion was and things may have moved on since then.

ANSI I have never been able to access - subscription only I think.

ITU-T I have had problems with in the past but I now seem to have access (but they could do with lessons from the datatracker about searching = I really do not want 11587 hits for G.709!)

IEEE I used to be able to access but now struggle - the website has moved and been 'improved'.  The URL in the HTML version of the I-D work but tell me that I do not have access.  802,3 I have previously downloaded and printed but seemingly no more.  Online viewing such a large document I find time consuming.

Tom Petch

From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
Sent: 10 November 2023 11:15

Some time ago ago I had this at my fingertips but no more:-(

I may find time for a proper review but did note, so far,

ISO/IEC C99 is in the I-D but not the I-D References

IEEE Std 754-2008: is in the I-D but the references have -2019; this topic is fraught - it may be that the  older one is wanted here

ANSI T1.105-1995: is in the I-D but the references have 2001

p.5 'section Section'

p.7 several should that might be SHOULD

Tom Petch

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Subject: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types) to Proposed Standard

The IESG has received a request from the Common Control and Measurement Plane
WG (ccamp) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for Layer
1 Types'
  <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> as Proposed Standard

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
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Abstract

   This document defines a collection of common data types and groupings
   in the YANG data modeling language for use with layer 1 networks.
   These derived common types and groupings are intended to be imported
   by modules that specify OTN networks, such as topology, tunnel,
   client signal adaptation and service.

The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types/

No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.

The document contains these normative downward references.
See RFC 3967 for additional information:
    draft-ietf-teas-rfc8776-update: Common YANG Data Types for Traffic Engineering (None - Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF))

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