Re: [CCAMP] Fw: New Version Notification for draft-vallin-ccamp-alarm-module-00.txt

Hi,

"t.petch" <ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote:
> Martin
> 
> When first I read this, in its netmod designation, I scribbled in the
> margin
> ** immenseley complicated

Can you be more specific; is this to be interpreted in the light of
your next comment (i.e., related to the text), or are you thinking
about the data model's structure (or something else)?

> ** 20 pages of motherhood
> :-(
> 
> It is unlike any other YANG module I-D that I have read.  Most such I-D
> are woefully weak on background information, leaving the reader in the
> dark as to the what and why of the YANG module.
> 
> This goes off the scale in the opposite direction (IMHO).
> 
> If you want to write an essay on Alarms, adding to the mountains that
> ITU-T have already produced, not to mention some smaller items of the
> IETF, then that should be a separate I-D, which the YANG module I-D, or
> any other I-D, can reference.
> 
> As it is, I think that those 20 pages may alienate those whom you might
> like to review this, since they will know it already

Ok.  If the background material is not needed, we can remove it (or
move to an Appendix or possibly another document, as you suggest).

I assume you are referring to sections 3 and 4, and large parts of the
text in section 5?  Some of the text in section 5 would still be
needed, but it can certainly be rewritten so that it is shorter.

/martin

> , perhaps better
> than the authors of this I-D.

> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Martin Bjorklund" <mbj@tail-f.com>
> To: <ccamp@ietf.org>
> Sent: Wednesday, October 11, 2017 8:13 AM
> Subject: [CCAMP] Fw: New Version Notification for
> draft-vallin-ccamp-alarm-module-00.txt
> 
> 
> > Hi,
> >
> > We have submitted draft-vallin-ccamp-alarm-module-00.  The technical
> > content is the same as in draft-vallin-netmod-alarm-module-02, which
> > we posted to the CCAMP mailing list some time ago for feedback.
> >
> > This draft is about generic alarm management.  We kindly ask the CCAMP
> > WG to review this document and provide feedback.  We especially
> > welcome feedback from people who are also involved in similar work in
> > the ITU.
> >
> >
> > /martin & stefan
> >
> >
> 
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