RE: draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt

["Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <[e-mail]>]

Some comments from my side inline

> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Ron Bonica [mailto:[e-mail]]
> > Sent: maandag 21 april 2003 20:55
> > To: Wijnen, Bert (Bert); Ccamp-wg (E-mail)
> > Subject: RE: draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt
> > 
> > 
> > Bert,
> > 
> > Sorry to have taken so long to respond. I have been away on 
> > vacation.
> > 
No problem... we all need that once in a while (or so I think)

> > Comments inline.....
> > 
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]]On
> > > Behalf Of Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
> > > Sent: Wednesday, April 16, 2003 9:30 AM
> > > To: Ccamp-wg (E-mail)
> > > Subject: FW: draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt
> > >
> > >
> > > Please consider these comments and let me know if they
> > > wrrant some additional text in the ID.
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > > Bert
> > >
> > > >*****  o Tracing Requirements for Generic Tunnels (None)
> > > >            <draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt>
> > > >         Token: Wijnen, Bert
> > > >         Note: New revision Addresses comments.
> > > >         Now on IESG agenda for April 17th
> > > >         Responsible: Bert
> > >
> > > 1. this document looks like it might be the union of all the
> > >    "i want it to do <foo>" requests. an important part of
> > >    requirements documents is knowing what to not require.
> > >    do they have any?
> > 
> > This document specifies requirements for a new protocol. It specifies
> > requirements, primarily, by detailing the required capabilities of
> > applications that will use this protocol. The application may implement
> > some subset of those capabilities. It may also implement a superset of
> > the required capabilities. However, protocol designers are not required
> > to consider the additional capabilities when designing the protocol.
> > 
> > Should there be some text to this effect included in the draft?
> > 
Might be a good idea... 

> > > 2. i am concerned about the security stuff that they've buried in
> > >    their requirements. nothing definite. it seems unwieldy. but
> > >    then, so many security things do...
> > 
> > Can you be more specific? Is there any particular requirement that
> > you feel cannot be implemented?
> > 
Well... remember I had a bot of trouble finding which of the numbered 
bullets needed some extra security or not... I guess that is what the 
commenting person may have meant with "burried". 

> > > 3. section 4.1 and 4.2 seem to be worded with a particular
> > >    implementation in mind. requirements documents ought not
> > >    specify solutions (eg, 4.2 talks about udp, why can't i use
> > >    icmp?)
> > 
> > Section 4 provides a few protocol requirements, stated as such. In
> > particular, Section 4.1 states that the new protocol will consist of
> > probes and responses, and that each probe/response pair will reveal
> > information regarding a network hop. (In this respect, the 
> > new protocol will resemble TRACEROUTE).
> > 
> > Had I remembered to include an application requirement to support partial
> > traces through broken paths, this requirement would have made much more
> > sense!
> > I will fix this.
> > 
Great

> > Section 4.2 requires that the protocol be implemented over UDP. I included
> > this section primarily to rule out implmentations that were _not_ 
> > acceptable. For example, ICMP should not be used, because carrying MPLS
> > information over ICMP would constitute a layer violation. TCP should not
> > be used, because this would conflict with the protocol's
> > requirement for statelessness. Tunnel specific mechanisms 
> > should not be used, because
> > this would conflict with the requirement for generality.
> > 
> > This leaves UDP and IP as the two most resonable candidates. Should I
> > include some words the that effect in the document?
> > 
So, although I guess many (nmost) of us understand that, adding some of that
explantnion to the document may help (more novice) readers.

> > 
> > > 4. justification of requirements might be nice.
> > >
> > 
> > This is interesting, but it could result in a much longer 
> > document. Wouldn't this distract the reader from the document's
> > basic intent?
> >
Always difficult to say. I personally like for example RFC3216 format.

 
> > In any event, I will spin a new version of the document as 
> > soon as there is some response to this message.
> > 
Good. I hope to get responses soon.

Others on the WG list, please do chime in if you have an opinion.

Bert
> >                                                        Ron
> > 
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