[CCAMP] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-ccamp-lmp-behavior-negotiation-09
Julien Meuric <julien.meuric@orange.com> Fri, 18 January 2013 17:00 UTC
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Subject: [CCAMP] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-ccamp-lmp-behavior-negotiation-09
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Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/routing.html Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-lmp-behavior-negotiation-09 Reviewer: Julien Meuric Review Date: 18 January 2013 IETF LC End Date: 21 January 2013 Intended Status: Standards Track *Summary:* This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be considered prior to it. *Comments:* This document is clearly written and easy to understand. The defined mechanism is simple and well specified. *Nits:* Abstract -Instead of "GMPLS networks", "GMPLS-controlled networks" reads more accurate to me. It would also align on the phrase used in the introduction. The resulting "Generalized Multiprotocol Label Switching (GMPLS)-controlled networks" may be checked with the RFC Editor. Introduction - s/LMP node/LMP-capable node/ - s/functions defined in that document/functions specified in that very document/ [repetition of "defined"] - s/the message types from/the types from/ [repetition of "message"] Section 2.2 - s/MAY include, HelloConfig/MAY include HelloConfig/ Section 3.1 - s/number of MBZ bits field/number of bits in MBZ field/ Section 4 - s/[RFC4202] defined/[RFC4202]-defined/ Section 9.2 - I tend to think that [LMP TEST] should now reference draft-cecczhang-ccamp-gmpls-g709v3-lmp Enjoy the week-end, Julien
- [CCAMP] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-ccamp-lmp-behav… Julien Meuric
- [CCAMP] 答复: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-ccamp-lmp-b… Lidan (Dan)
- Re: [CCAMP] 答复: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-ccamp-l… Julien Meuric
- Re: [CCAMP] 答复: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-ccamp-l… Lou Berger