RE: Two week last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethernet-arch-03.txt
"Attila Takacs" <Attila.Takacs@ericsson.com> Tue, 11 November 2008 08:48 UTC
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Subject: RE: Two week last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethernet-arch-03.txt
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From: Attila Takacs <Attila.Takacs@ericsson.com>
To: Don Fedyk <dwfedyk@nortel.com>, lberger@labn.net, Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>
Cc: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>, ccamp@ops.ietf.org
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Hi all, Some comments on the draft, mostly editorial. Best regards, Attila -Move the abbreviation section (2.3.2) in the beginning of the document. I would consider moving the whole terminology section (2.3) forward. -Page 3, delete "Document History" -Page 3, Introduction, last sentence of second paragraph, change "but not an explicitly" ->"but not on explicitly" -Page 3, Introduction, 5th paragraph: add a new reference to 802.1ad and reword the first sentence -Page 4, last paragraph change: "This document introduces and explains the concept of an Ethernet Label Switched Path (Eth-LSP)." -> "This document introduces and explains GMPLS control plane deployment for Ethernet and the concept of the Ethernet Label Switched Path (Eth-LSP)." -Page 5, Background, second paragraph, first sentence change: "this section is based on the on-going work" -> "this section is based on both finished and on-going work" -Page 7, bullet on I-tagged interfaces, change second sentence: "An I-Tag contains a service identifier (24 bit I-SID) and priority markings as well as some other flags." -> "An I-Tag contains a service identifier (24 bit I-SID) and priority markings as well as some other fields." -Page 7, first paragraph after the bullet list, change: "In general, the different switching type determines" -> "In general, the switching type determines" and "The type may also" -> "The switching type may also" -Page 7, last paragraph, delete: "For the Eth-LSP unicast mode of behavior, the hardware performs unicast packet forwarding of known MAC addresses leveraging existing Ethernet forwarding." -Page 8, OAM, last paragraph, reword to: "Both Y.1731 & 802.1ag assumes that bidirectional transactions (e.g., LBM/LBR) use the same VID in both directions. However in some scenarios, especially with explicitly routed paths [802.1Qay], it is possible that different VIDs are used upstream and downstream. In the context of [802.1Qay] work is ongoing to update [802.1ag] to support such scenarios." -Page 8, Bi-directional Congruent LSP, typo, "LSP shared" -> "LSP shares" -Page 8, Shared forwarding: add at the end: "In contrast to merging where control plane states as well as forwarding entries are merged, with shared forwarding dedicated states for all Eth-LSP are maintained regardless of shared forwarding entries." -Page 8, add the definition of Eth-LSPs: "Eth-LSP: This term refers to Ethernet service paths that are controlled via GMPLS." -Page 10, Framework, first sentence: remove parenthesis around GMPLS -Page 12, first paragraph reorder to read: "...This valid MAC checking and broadcast supports Ethernet learning. A special case is when a VID is defined for only two ports on one bridge, effectively resulting in a p2p forwarwading constraint, in this case all frames tagged with that VID received over one of these ports are forward over the other port without address learning. <new paragraph> [802.1Qay] allows for turning off learning and hence the broadcast mechanism providing means to create explicitly routed Ethernet connections." -Page 16, section 8, delete last sentence "More detail will be added to the section in a later revision." and/or add further details :-) > -----Original Message----- > From: owner-ccamp@ops.ietf.org > [mailto:owner-ccamp@ops.ietf.org] On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel > Sent: Wednesday, October 29, 2008 8:48 PM > To: ccamp@ops.ietf.org > Subject: Two week last call on > draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethernet-arch-03.txt > > This email starts a two week working group last call on > "GMPLS Ethernet Label Switching Architecture and Framework" > > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-eth > ernet-arch-03.txt > > The I-D is marked as Informational. > > Please send your comments to the list by 12 noon GMT Friday > 14th November. > > Thanks, > Adrian and Deborah > > >
- Two week last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethe… Adrian Farrel
- RE: Two week last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-… Attila Takacs
- Re: Two week last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-… Adrian Farrel
- Last callcomplete : draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ethern… Adrian Farrel
- RE: Two week last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-… PAPADIMITRIOU Dimitri