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Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com> Wed, 04 October 2023 12:12 UTC

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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: "draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme@ietf.org>, "cdni@ietf.org" <cdni@ietf.org>
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Thank you for this document.
I only have one nit that can be resolved at the same time as other IETF Last Call comments. I will initiate the Last Call now.

In Section 3.1, please change
> Description: See Section 3.1.1 of [RFC8739]
to:
> Description: See lifetime, Section 3.1.1 of [RFC8739]
(or ”lifetime-adjust” in the description of star-lifetime-adjust)
This is just to be precise, since the name is not exactly the same in the two docs.

Thanks,
Francesca

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