Re: [CDNi] AD Review of draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-03

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To: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>, "draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme@ietf.org>, "cdni@ietf.org" <cdni@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: AD Review of draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-03
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Date: Thu, 07 Dec 2023 15:02:26 +0000
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Hi Francesca,

I posted an updated version that corrects the nit.

Thanks,
regards,
Frederic


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De : Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
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Objet : AD Review of draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-03


Thank you for this document.

I only have one nit that can be resolved at the same time as other IETF Last Call comments. I will initiate the Last Call now.



In Section 3.1, please change

> Description: See Section 3.1.1 of [RFC8739]

to:

> Description: See lifetime, Section 3.1.1 of [RFC8739]

(or ”lifetime-adjust” in the description of star-lifetime-adjust)

This is just to be precise, since the name is not exactly the same in the two docs.



Thanks,

Francesca
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