Re: [CDNi] TR: New Version Notification for draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-04.txt

Hi Kevin,

Thanks for your comments. I will update the draft accordingly.

Regards,
Frederic

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Objet : Re: [CDNi] TR: New Version Notification for draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-04.txt

also, for each metadata property, please add a "Mandatory-to-Specify: " description.

On Sun, Jul 8, 2018 at 3:02 PM, Kevin Ma <kevin.j.ma.ietf@gmail.com<mailto:kevin.j.ma.ietf@gmail.com>> wrote:
Hi Frederic,

  Couple of comments (as an individual) on the updated draft:

  - section 4.1: Do we need MI.SecureDelegation?  Doesn't the presence (or lack thereof) of an AcmeStarDelegationMethod, SubcertsDelegationMethod, and/or LurkDelegationMethod imply support (or lack thereof) for the given method?  Support for the "*Method" objects would seem to obviate the need for the SecureDelegation object?

  - section 4.1: There is a missing set of curly braces around the TimeWindowRule and a missing "]" for the list of TimeWindowRules, in the TimeWindowACL example.

  - sections 6.1/6.2/6.3: The references to "Section 5.1" need to be updated to be for section 4.1, 4.2.1, and 4.2.2, respectively.

  - section 6.4: There is a section missing for LurkDelegationMethod, referencing section 4.2.3.

thanx.

--  Kevin J. Ma

On Tue, Jul 3, 2018 at 5:14 AM, <frederic.fieau@orange.com<mailto:frederic.fieau@orange.com>> wrote:
Dear all,

I posted an update of the draft "CDNI extensions for HTTPS delegation" that aims at extending CDNI metadata to handle delegation methods being proposed at the IETF.

We've made few corrections in the text and in the metadata model. We also added potential support for the LURK mechanism.
We still think that this topic is of interest for the CDNI WG and that it deserves more attention.

Regards,
Frederic

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A new version of I-D, draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-04.txt
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IETF repository.

Name:           draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation
Revision:       04
Title:          CDNI extensions for HTTPS delegation
Document date:  2018-07-02
Group:          Individual Submission
Pages:          13
URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-04.txt
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation/
Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-04
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Abstract:
   The delivery of content over HTTPS involving multiple CDNs raises
   credential management issues.  This document proposes extensions in
   CDNI Control and Metadata interfaces to setup HTTPS delegation from
   an Upstream CDN (uCDN) to a Downstream CDN (dCDN).

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