Re: [CDNi] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-finkelman-cdni-rr-sva-extensions-01.txt

[Ori Finkelman <[e-mail]>]

Hi Kevin,
Thanks for the feedback.
I have incorporated all your comments but the ABNF.
Let's keep the ABNF to be discussed in the CDNI meeting.

Thanks,
Ori

On Sun, Jul 8, 2018 at 10:51 PM, Kevin Ma <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi Ori,
>
>   (As an individual) I think the extensions are applicable outside of SVA
> OC, but I don't think it's bad to have that motivation in the draft.
>
>   Some comments on the updated draft:
>
>   - section 2: Maybe add something in the beginning that more explicitly
> describes why this is a capability and not a bootstrap or metadata (i.e.,
> it can change over time due to dynamic scaling or failover so doesn't fit
> in bootstrap and goes from dCDN to uCDN, unlike metadata which goes from
> uCDN to dCDN).
>
>   - esction 2.1: Do you want to add a simple json example?
>
>   - section 2.2: Don't know if it would help, but you could add a simple
> ABNF for constructing the Location URI.
>
>   - section 2 nits:
>     "route client request" -> "route client requests"
>     "may be to rough" -> "may be too rough"
>     "limitations, for example" -> "limitations: for example,"
>     "or a list of uCDN hosts" -> "a list of uCDN hosts"
>     "advertise them within" -> "advertise the hosts within"
>     "that this redirect target is attached to" -> "to which this redirect
> target is attached"
>     "which is attached" -> "that is attached"
>     "Example of MI." -> "Example of a MI."
>
>   - section 2.2 nits:
>     "with trailing slash" -> "with a trailing slash"
>     "weather or not" -> "whether or not"
>     "Example of MI." -> "Example of a MI."
>
>   - section 3 nits:
>     "to which it can route the request to" -> "to which it can route the
> request"
>     "failures, or temporary" -> "failures or temporary"
>     "In this case the cache" -> "In this case, the cache"
>     "HTTP redirect, in the case of HTTP redirection mode": remove the
> comma or even just remove the whole clause after the comma?
>     "dCDN responsibility" -> "dCDN's responsibility"
>     "which is used for requesting" -> "that may have been used to request"
>     "Example of MI." -> "Example of a MI."
>     remove "(which contains two fallback-address objects)"
>     "which hosts addreses" -> "which host address"
>
> thanx!
>
> --  Kevin J. Ma
>
>
> On Wed, May 16, 2018 at 5:55 AM, Ori Finkelman <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
>> Dear colleagues,
>> We have just submitted version 01 of this draft.
>>
>> A general question about this draft and next to come. do you think we
>> should keep it in the context of SVA extensions ? currently SVA and Open
>> Caching a references in this draft as the source of the requirements.
>> Should we keep it this way, or remove it and make it more generic ?
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Ori
>>
>>
>>
>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>> From: <[e-mail]>
>> Date: Wed, May 16, 2018 at 12:51 PM
>> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-finkelman-cdni-rr-sva-ex
>> tensions-01.txt
>> To: Sanjay Mishra <[e-mail] <[e-mail]>>,
>> Ori Finkelman <[e-mail]>
>>
>>
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-finkelman-cdni-rr-sva-extensions-01.txt
>> has been successfully submitted by Ori Finkelman and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Name:           draft-finkelman-cdni-rr-sva-extensions
>> Revision:       01
>> Title:          CDNI SVA Request Routing Extensions
>> Document date:  2018-05-15
>> Group:          Individual Submission
>> Pages:          11
>> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-
>> drafts/draft-finkelman-cdni-rr-sva-extensions-01.txt
>> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/
>> doc/draft-finkelman-cdni-rr-sva-extensions/
>> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/d
>> raft-finkelman-cdni-rr-sva-extensions-01
>> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/
>> doc/html/draft-finkelman-cdni-rr-sva-extensions
>> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?
>> url2=draft-finkelman-cdni-rr-sva-extensions-01
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    The Open Caching working group of the Streaming Video Alliance is
>>    focused on the delegation of video delivery requests from commercial
>>    CDNs to a caching layer at the ISP.  In that aspect, Open Caching is
>>    a specific use case of CDNI, where the commercial CDN is the upstream
>>    CDN (uCDN) and the ISP caching layer is the downstream CDN (dCDN).
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
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