Re: [CDNi] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-03: (with COMMENT)

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Hi Roman,

For the first comment, we chose to keep the figure 1 in the document as it is not the same format as figure 12 of RFC9115.
The second comment has been taken into account as we added that the URL in acme-delegation must use the https scheme.

Thank you,
Regards,
Frederic


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COMMENT:
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Thank you to Valery Smyslov for the SECDIR review.

** Section 3.  Recommend citing Figure 12 of RFC9115.  It appears that Figure 1 is reproducing it.

** Section 3.1 .  Recommend emphasizing that the URL in acme-delegation must use the https scheme.



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