[CDNi] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-03: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 23 October 2023 18:55 UTC

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Subject: [CDNi] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-03: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-cdni-delegation-acme-03: No Objection

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Thank you to Valery Smyslov for the SECDIR review.

** Section 3.  Recommend citing Figure 12 of RFC9115.  It appears that Figure 1 is reproducing it.

** Section 3.1 .  Recommend emphasizing that the URL in acme-delegation must use the https scheme.