[Cellar] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-17: (with COMMENT)

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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-17: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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[[ comments ]]

[ section 3.3 ]

* Suggest either defining colorspace_type value and coder_type values
  before using them, or provide a reference in this section (i.e. just
  include a reference to sections 4.2.3 and 4.2.5).


[[ nits ]]

[ section 3.2 ]

* In the description of Figure 3:
  "relatively positions" -> "relatively positioned", I think.

[ section 3.3 ]

* "signed 16-bit signed integer": choose any one instance of 'signed', I'd say

[ section 3.7.2 ]

* "and then if used transparency" -> "and then, if used, transparency"