Re: [Cfrg] Proposed Informational Note: Security Guidelines for Cryptographic Algorithms in the W3C Web Cryptography API

"Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com> Thu, 20 November 2014 15:59 UTC

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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
To: Harry Halpin <hhalpin@w3.org>, "cfrg@irtf.org" <cfrg@irtf.org>
Date: Thu, 20 Nov 2014 10:59:27 -0500
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Great, this is good progress.

> Note that draft, while attempting

I think you mean "Note that /this/ draft"
 
If this document is intended to be stand-alone, you need to describe the columns in Table 1.  Last line of that table has an extra close-paren.

Shouldn't sec4 be right after 1?

I think you should either do just-webcrypto, or explicitly say 'many/most ietf rfcs'  My pref is just webcrypto.  Drop pkcs1.5 et al.  Or move it and the non-WebCrypto ones to an appendix.

I think you need a table of acronyms near the beginning; CCA is used in table 1 for example.  And redefined in Rogaways' quote in 5.7

This is a very useful document, thanks.
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