Re: [clue] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

[Alexey Melnikov <[e-mail]>]

Hi Simon,

On Fri, Jun 3, 2016, at 02:11 PM, Simon Pietro Romano wrote:
> Hello Alexey,
> 
> please find in-line our answers to your comments (preceded by
> [spromano]).
> 
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > DISCUSS:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > 
> > This is generally a well written document, but I have a couple of very
> > small points that need to be fixed:
> > 
> > Abstract: I have no CLUE what you are talking about. Abstracts should be
> > self contained, i.e. being understandable on its own. The Introduction
> > section has more relevant text which you might want to copy here.
> 
> [spromano] Got it. What about the following amended abstract?
>
> *****************************************************************************
> This document provides an XML schema file 
> for the definition of CLUE data model types. the term 'CLUE' stands for 
> "ControLling mUltiple streams for tElepresence" and is the name of 
> the IETF working group in which this document, as well as other 
> companion documents, has been developed. The document defines a coherent
> structure for information associated with the description of a 
> telepresence session. 
> *****************************************************************************

This is much better. I am not convinced that the acronym CLUE is going
to have much relevance after the WG is closed, but this is not a reason
to block publication of this document.
 
> > In 11.13: you need to have a Normative Reference to the language tag
> > document here (RFC 5646) when you describe the "lang" attribute.
> 
> [spromano] Done.
> 
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > COMMENT:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > 
> > In 11.24.1: A reference to xCard would be good to have here.
> 
> [spromano] Done (the mentioned text is now in Section 16.1, btw).
> 
> > In 16.30:
> > 
> > MIME type name typo on the Subject line.
> 
> [spromano] Typo corrected.

Thank you for fixing these.

> > "Application that use this media type: none ?"
> > 
> > I don't think this is correct. Please provide some examples of
> > applications that would be using this media type. If no applications are
> > going to be using this media type, there is no need to register it ;-).
> 
> [spromano] Corrected. We put "CLUE-capable telepresence systems” there.
> Does this work for you?

Yes.

Best Regards,
Alexey