Re: [clue] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

[Simon Pietro Romano <[e-mail]>]

Hello Alexey,

please find in-line our answers to your comments (preceded by [spromano]).

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> DISCUSS:
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> This is generally a well written document, but I have a couple of very
> small points that need to be fixed:
> 
> Abstract: I have no CLUE what you are talking about. Abstracts should be
> self contained, i.e. being understandable on its own. The Introduction
> section has more relevant text which you might want to copy here.

[spromano] Got it. What about the following amended abstract?

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This document provides an XML schema file 
for the definition of CLUE data model types. the term 'CLUE' stands for 
"ControLling mUltiple streams for tElepresence" and is the name of 
the IETF working group in which this document, as well as other 
companion documents, has been developed. The document defines a coherent
structure for information associated with the description of a 
telepresence session. 
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> In 11.13: you need to have a Normative Reference to the language tag
> document here (RFC 5646) when you describe the "lang" attribute.

[spromano] Done.

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> COMMENT:
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> In 11.24.1: A reference to xCard would be good to have here.

[spromano] Done (the mentioned text is now in Section 16.1, btw).

> In 16.30:
> 
> MIME type name typo on the Subject line.

[spromano] Typo corrected.

> "Application that use this media type: none ?"
> 
> I don't think this is correct. Please provide some examples of
> applications that would be using this media type. If no applications are
> going to be using this media type, there is no need to register it ;-).

[spromano] Corrected. We put "CLUE-capable telepresence systems” there. Does this work for you?


Cheers,

Simon & Roberta
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