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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
To: Esko Dijk <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl>, "draft-dijk-core-groupcomm-bis@ietf.org" <draft-dijk-core-groupcomm-bis@ietf.org>
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Hi Esko and GC co-authors,

On 17/10/2019, 16:26, "Esko Dijk" <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl> wrote:
> Hello Thomas,
>
> Thanks for your review. Below the responses of the groupcomm-bis authors
> ("[GC]") on your review comments. Some of these were already addressed in the
> -01 version. Others will be worked on for the -02 version.

Thanks very much for the thoughtful comments and clarifications, they
really help.  I'm going to re-review -02 -- do you have a time frame for
that?

Cheers, t


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