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Esko Dijk <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl> Fri, 01 November 2019 09:46 UTC

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From: Esko Dijk <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl>
To: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>, "draft-dijk-core-groupcomm-bis@ietf.org" <draft-dijk-core-groupcomm-bis@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [core] Review of draft-dijk-core-groupcomm-bis-00
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Hello Thomas, 

Our plan is to submit -02 by Monday Nov 4th. Meanwhile you can also have a look if you want at the current open issues we have in the tracker online https://gitlab.com/crimson84/draft-groupcomm-bis/issues 
Other CoRE members are also invited to raise issues, or comment on issues of course.

Thanks in advance for your planned -02 review!

Best regards
Esko

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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com> 
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Subject: Re: Review of draft-dijk-core-groupcomm-bis-00

Hi Esko and GC co-authors,

On 17/10/2019, 16:26, "Esko Dijk" <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl> wrote:
> Hello Thomas,
>
> Thanks for your review. Below the responses of the groupcomm-bis 
> authors
> ("[GC]") on your review comments. Some of these were already addressed 
> in the
> -01 version. Others will be worked on for the -02 version.

Thanks very much for the thoughtful comments and clarifications, they really help.  I'm going to re-review -02 -- do you have a time frame for that?

Cheers, t


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