Re: [core] [netmod] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-core-comi-16

[Carsten Bormann <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,

thank you for this feedback, which I only now get to put into the next revision of the draft.
The changes marked here with a “commit” number are both in the repository ([1], see [2]) and in draft-ietf-core-comi-17.

[1]: https://github.com/core-wg/comi
[2]: https://github.com/core-wg/comi/commits/main/


> On 2023-09-06, at 18:22, tom petch <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> […]
> <tp>
> I was slightly surprised when I got to the IANA Considerations and found the registration of a YANG module which I had yet to see.  

Did we miss any formal steps?

> One convention is that Appendices are Informative not Normative so I would suggest moving the YANG module into the body of the document or adding a statement to the Appendix that this is Normative and putting in  a forward reference in the IANA Considerations to the module.

Added statement in c72d08c, forward references in 790e8e7

> 'This draft...' in several places

Oops: 78521d0

> YANG import lack references which need to be Normative.

commit: 7d5784f

> Simplified BSD license is OOD

commit: 5795b5a

> As is the copyright.

commit: d3c50b3

> YANG contact lacks WG details
> 
> The YANG module authors are not quite the same as the I-D authors while the authors' addresses at the end are different yet again

There were indeed a few updates needed to author and contact information.
commit: 542f3c8

> 'create or list instance,'
> perhaps
> 'create a list instance,'

commit: 50b6a1b

Thank you again for this review!

Grüße, Carsten