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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
To: Jaime Jiménez <jaime@iki.fi>, "core@ietf.org" <core@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [core] WGLC on draft-ietf-core-senml-data-ct-02
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Hi Ari, Carsten,

I have reviewed draft-ietf-core-senml-data-ct-02 and overall it looks
good to me.  I've left a few annotations below.

Cheers!

* Section 1, first sentence:
    * One of "various" or "different" look redundant to me.
* Section 2, last sentence:
    * I-D.bormann-core-media-content-type-format is not just very
      helpful, it also contains the definition of Content-Coding
      which is not found elsewhere AFAIK.
* Section 3, first para:
    * you might want to reorganise the second sentence (starting with
      "the Content-Format indication") to make it more readable.
* Section 3, third para:
    * "[...] appended to the Content Type _value_ (media type [...]"
* Section 3, last sentence:
    * Might be restructured for readability; one suggestion: "If no "@"
      sign is present outside any media type parameters, the consumer
      can assume that no encoding transformation has been applied to the
      representation."
* Section 6:
    * Maybe add a mention to the risks associated with compression
      content codings (zip bomb, etc.)"
* Section 7:
    * Not sure but, would it be worth adding a note regarding the
      formatting rules (i.e., an explicit pointer to Section 3)?
* Section 8.1:
    * Why is CBOR normative?
    * Why is the SenML registry a normative reference?







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