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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
To: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>
CC: Jaime Jiménez <jaime@iki.fi>, "core@ietf.org" <core@ietf.org>, Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
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Subject: Re: [core] WGLC on draft-ietf-core-senml-data-ct-02
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Your changes look great.  Just a couple of comments:

On 19/08/2020, 14:17, "Carsten Bormann" <cabo@tzi.org> wrote:
> > * Section 7:
> >    * Not sure but, would it be worth adding a note regarding the
> >      formatting rules (i.e., an explicit pointer to Section 3)?
>
> The registry has no place for this information, and the reference
> should include the other sections, so I don’t see a good way to add
> this.

I noticed a "Notes" column in the registry [1], that's why I suggested
using it to offer a more granular pointer into the spec.  But since the
document is very compact, the RFC reference works as well.

[1] https://www.iana.org/assignments/senml/senml.xhtml#senml-labels

> >    * Why is the SenML registry a normative reference?
>
> Because this specification registers “ct” in that registry.  (I think
> we can discuss whether that is normative, but I believe you need to
> understand this registry to understand the registration.  Previously,
> people just haven’t referenced a registry they registered in, which I
> consider an omission.)

Fair enough :-)

Cheers!



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