[core] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-object-security-08

[Joel Halpern <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-core-object-security-08
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-02-21
IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-02
IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
    In section 8.2 on verifying the request, step 5 says to "compose" the
    Additional Authentication Data.  I would have expected it to be "verify"
    the Additional Authentication Data.  I could imagine that the verification
    consists of composing what it should be, and then comparing with what is
    received.  But I do not see the comparison step.  is it implicit in some
    other step?  This occurs again in 8.4, so I presume I am simply missing
    something.  This may suggest some clarification could be useful.

Nits/editorial comments: N/A