[core] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [core] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-senml-versions/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for the work put into this document. Please find below one non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be appreciated), and some nits. Thanks to Jaime Jiménez for his shepherd's write-up (including the WG consensus) even if I regret that no motivation is given about the intended RFC status. Thank you Carsten for acknowledging Jaime's work. I hope that this helps to improve the document, Regards, -éric == COMMENTS == -- Section 2.2 -- While the motivation for the update is explained, is there any reason why the usual OLD TEXT / NEW TEXT is not used here? == NITS == -- Section 2 -- Even with the warning in section 1.1, it took me a while to 'see' the Sigma sign (and the were not helping). Suggest to 'show' it in section 1.1. OTOH, congratulations for using the XMLv3 features for the SVG equivalent, quite neat. The whole text of this section is quite convoluted as it is a plain bit mask.
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