Re: [core] I-D Action: draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-06.txt

[Ari Keränen <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

This update addresses the IESG review comments from Warren, Barry, Alissa, Eric, and Roman, and the gen-art, IoT directorate, an ops directorate review comments.

The discuss from Adam and couple of comments from Ben still need to be addressed in a new revision, but we wanted to get this version out now so that the other ADs can check that their comments are addressed and the group can review all the changes so far in context.

Summary of updates:
* Re-wrote Fragment ID section; added examples
* Clarified: Fetch needs at least one Record and Name 
* Clarified: Patch Records MUST contain Value or Sum 
* Clarified: CoAP provides the security for FETCH/PATCH
* Clarified: iPATCH and PATCH are equivalent here
* Return empty Pack when no matches to FETCH
* IANA registration clarifications
* Added selecting records by unit
* Editorial fixes


Cheers,
Ari

> On 27. Dec 2019, at 22.04, "[e-mail]" <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Constrained RESTful Environments WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : FETCH & PATCH with Sensor Measurement Lists (SenML)
>        Authors         : Ari Keranen
>                          Mojan Mohajer
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-06.txt
>    Pages           : 11
>    Date            : 2019-12-27
> 
> Abstract:
>   The Sensor Measurement Lists (SenML) media type and data model can be
>   used to send collections of resources, such as batches of sensor data
>   or configuration parameters.  The CoAP FETCH, PATCH, and iPATCH
>   methods enable accessing and updating parts of a resource or multiple
>   resources with one request.  This document defines new media types
>   for the CoAP FETCH, PATCH, and iPATCH methods for resources
>   represented with the SenML data model.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-senml-etch/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-06
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-06
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-06
> 
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