Re: [core] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: (with COMMENT)

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Thu, 03 June 2021 07:41 UTC

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Subject: Re: [core] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: (with COMMENT)
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On 2021-06-03, at 07:28, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: No Objection
> 
> 
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> I only have a few nits to contribute here.
> 
> In Section 2:
> 
>   The present specification defines "SenML Features", each identified
>   by a "feature name" (a text string) and a "feature code", an unsigned
>   integer less than 53.
> 
> Why is the former descriptive clause parenthetical, while the latter is separated by a comma?
> 
> In Section 2.1, I think all the instances of "less" should actually be "fewer".

Thanks, fixes now in https://github.com/core-wg/senml-versions/commit/9229e0f

(I only found one instance of less that should be “fewer”, though.)

Grüße, Carsten