Re: [Crypto-panel] Last (I hope) review request of draft-fluhrer-lms-more-parm-sets

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From: Thomas Pornin <thomas.pornin@nccgroup.com>
To: "Stanislav V. Smyshlyaev" <smyshsv@gmail.com>, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
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Subject: Re: [Crypto-panel] Last (I hope) review request of draft-fluhrer-lms-more-parm-sets
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I am fine with the current version. The one I reviewed (version 9) was already quite good!
(There is a typo in the last paragraph of the Introduction: “to refer to these signatures are LMS signatures” -> “… as LMS signatures”.)

Thomas

From: Stanislav V. Smyshlyaev <smyshsv@gmail.com>
Date: Tuesday, December 19, 2023 at 03:12
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, Thomas Pornin <thomas.pornin@nccgroup.com>
Cc: Scott Fluhrer <sfluhrer@cisco.com>, crypto-panel@irtf.org <crypto-panel@irtf.org>, cfrg-chairs@ietf.org <cfrg-chairs@ietf.org>, Quynh Dang <quynh.dang@nist.gov>
Subject: Re: [Crypto-panel] Last (I hope) review request of draft-fluhrer-lms-more-parm-sets
Thank you, Russ!

Thomas, you did a review of this draft in spring - could you please check that you are fine with the current version (draft-fluhrer-lms-more-parm-sets-11)?

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-fluhrer-lms-more-parm-sets

Regards,
Stanislav (for CFRG chairs)

On Mon, Dec 18, 2023 at 7:19 PM Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com<mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>> wrote:
I have reviewed and implemented this document.  I cannot add value by doing so again.

Russ



On Dec 18, 2023, at 8:07 AM, Stanislav V. Smyshlyaev <smyshsv@gmail.com<mailto:smyshsv@gmail.com>> wrote:

Dear Crypto Panel experts,

Any volunteers to check the changes in the draft?

Regards,
Stanislav (for CFRG chairs)

On Fri, Dec 15, 2023 at 11:46 PM Scott Fluhrer (sfluhrer) <sfluhrer@cisco.com<mailto:sfluhrer@cisco.com>> wrote:
I’m trying to put this one to bed, and apparently, it needs a final review.

I did make an update in September (to address review comments I got, mostly adding explanations and a bit of word-smithing) – could someone please look at it, and see if there’s anything unacceptable?

Thanks!
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