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Re: [dane] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Sun, 19 January 2014 08:39 UTC

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Looks good, thank you for addressing my comments.

Regards,

Dan


From: Olafur Gudmundsson [mailto:ogud@ogud.com]
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Subject: Re: [dane] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03


On Jan 15, 2014, at 10:11 AM, "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com<mailto:dromasca@avaya.com>> wrote:


I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03.txt
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 1/15/2014
IETF LC End Date: 1/23/2014
IESG Telechat date:

Summary:
Ready with issues

Major issues:
None – it’s a simple, clear and useful document.

thanks



Minor issues:
1.       In Section 2.3 the I-D recommends that the values in reference column for SHA-256 and SHA-512 refer to [RFC 6698] while the IANA Considerations section in RFC 6698 recommends and the registry entries in the TLSA Matching Types table athttp://www.iana.org/assignments/dane-parameters/dane-parameters.xhtml  point to [RFC 6234].

Good Catch, fixed


2.       As this I-D updates the registries with a column for acronyms, it seems more accurate that the reference columns of all tables mention both  [RFC 6698] and [RFC XXXX] (this RFC)

I'm not sure if I agree, all this document does is to change the format of the registries it is not the definitions of any table entry.
But I think it would be good to change the reference for each of the registries to point to both RFC6698 and RFCXXXX

I propose adding to each registry sections the following text:
        "Update reference for this registry to include both [RFC6698] and [RFC-this-document]"


Nits/editorial comments:
In the Introduction section:

‘This document updates the IANA registry definition for TLSA
   record to add a column with acronym for each specified field’
s/acronym/an acronym/


Fixed

thanks

          Olafur

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