[Detnet] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn

Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu> Mon, 18 January 2021 05:46 UTC

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I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. 
The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related 
drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and 
sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide 
assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing 
Directorate, please see ​ 

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it 
would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF 
Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through 
discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn
Reviewer: Loa Andersson
Review Date: date
IETF LC End Date: -
Intended Status: Informational


No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

The draft is well and clearly written and addresses a real issue, the 
relationship between the MPLS layer flow and a TSN flow,

Major Issues:

No major issues found.

Minor Issues:
No minor issues found.

I found very few nits, mostly typos and suggestion for the abbreviation 
list. The are included in included word file, the authors may use or 
discard as they want.


Loa Andersson                        email: loa@pi.nu
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