[Detnet] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-06: (with COMMENT)

[Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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As noted in the abstract, “[t]his document does not define new procedures or
processes.”  Since Sections 1 – 5 appears to be primarily annotated references
to TSN citations, I was surprised that the Security Considerations did not
follow the same pattern.  I would have expected pointers into the underlying
IEEE TSN specifications on security considerations.  The text appears to be
generic, and beyond a single sentence, identical to
draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn.