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Don Fedyk <dfedyk@labn.net> Thu, 22 February 2024 17:49 UTC

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From: Don Fedyk <dfedyk@labn.net>
To: "John G. Scudder" <jgs@bgp.nu>, "draft-ietf-detnet-yang@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-detnet-yang@ietf.org>, "detnet@ietf.org" <detnet@ietf.org>, DetNet Chairs <detnet-chairs@ietf.org>, "'Gengxuesong (Geng Xuesong)'" <gengxuesong@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] draft-ietf-detnet-yang approval
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Hi

I have updated the draft from comments and placed the update in DetNet GitHub. I've checked that the changes propagated through the text and the test files. 

You can review the changes most easily by downloading the xml source file and running a diff through the auth tools.
File
https://github.com/detnet-wg/draft-ietf-detnet-yang/blob/master/draft-ietf-detnet-yang-20.xml

Tools:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/

I will upload the final draft tomorrow if anyone would like to review the security section that is the main text change. Updated from Roman's suggestions. 

Other changes: 
Next hops are identified by inet:ip-address not ip-address-no-zone. <- This was a bug.
Member name-ref consistency: 
OLD
|  +--ro member-app*            
|  +--ro member-service*        
|  +--ro member-fwd-sublayer*   |  +--ro member-fwd-sublayer* 


|  +--ro member-app-flow*       
|  +--ro member-svc-sublayer*   
|  +--ro member-fwd-sublayer* 

Dates and numbers. 


Thanks
Don 



-----Original Message-----
From: Don Fedyk <dfedyk@labn.net> 
Sent: Thursday, February 15, 2024 1:49 PM
To: John G. Scudder <jgs@bgp.nu>; draft-ietf-detnet-yang@ietf.org
Subject: RE: draft-ietf-detnet-yang approval 

Thanks John

I will update in a day or so and send a note where you can see the updated diffs before I post a revision. 

Don 

-----Original Message-----
From: John G. Scudder <jgs@bgp.nu> 
Sent: Thursday, February 15, 2024 1:46 PM
To: draft-ietf-detnet-yang@ietf.org
Subject: draft-ietf-detnet-yang approval 

Hi All,

Thanks to all your work on the draft, it sailed to easy approval at today’s IESG meeting. I see there are a number of review comments that should probably be integrated into one more revision before we send it to the RFC Editor, so I’ll be waiting for those. 

Regards,

—John

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