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Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-03

Kiran.Makhijani <Kiran.Makhijani@huawei.com> Wed, 02 May 2018 19:50 UTC

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I have read and reviewed the doc. It is ready for publication. 

Though it will help to clarify use of 'critical flow' in section 2,
   2.  Support for critical packet flows that:
Since it has no previous context or definition. Can we replace with 'deterministic flow'?

editorial nit, last line of section 3.1.
   s/seu th epath up/set up the path

-Kiran
On 5/2/18, 9:31 AM, "detnet on behalf of János Farkas" <detnet-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of janos.farkas@ericsson.com> wrote:

    Dear All,
    
    This starts a two week Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on 
    draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-03.
    
    The WGLC ends on May 16.
    
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