Re: [Detnet] Initial DP split documents available

"Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com> Mon, 23 April 2018 13:37 UTC

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From: "Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 23 Apr 2018 09:36:55 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Initial DP split documents available
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Balázs,

Sorry, I was busy elsewhere last week and didn’t have a chance to check out
the new drafts. Thanks for taking a first cut at the separation.

My initial reactions:

1. There is a lot of duplication between the drafts, which can allow drift
between them where it shouldn’t occur, and it will require a lot of work to
keep them in sync. I suggest either a three-way split, with common stuff in
one draft and just encapsulation details in the other two, or what may be
easier, designating one of them as the “primary” draft (most probably the
MPLS draft) that includes all of the common text, and utilizing a lot of
section references to the primary draft in the secondary draft, removing
any duplication between the two.

2. The text from draft-malis-detnet-ip-dp-00 has not yet been incorporated
into draft-ietf-detnet-dp-sol-ip-00. This can happen in the next revision.

3. Since I believe the WG consensus is to use a common encapsulation for
IPv4 and IPv6, we can remove sections from draft-ietf-detnet-dp-sol-ip-00
that deal with only one or the other, such as 8.6, 8.7, 10,1,1, Appendix B,
etc., plus any reference to the IPv6 flow label.

Thanks,
Andy


On Sun, Apr 22, 2018 at 2:33 AM, Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com
> wrote:

> Hi,
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> Just a friendly reminder, please send your comments (if any).
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> The sooner the better …
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> Note: DetNet working meeting 24th April at 17:00 CEST
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> Thanks
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> Bala’zs
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> *From:* Balázs Varga A
> *Sent:* 2018. április 16. 7:50
> *To:* detnet@ietf.org
> *Subject:* Initial DP split documents available
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> Hi,
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> The initial version of the DP split documents are available here:
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> https://github.com/detnet-wg
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> Mail based review is started. Please, provide your comments via the
> mailing-list first.
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> If You intend to edit the documents you can clone the master and do pull
> requests
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> after sending your comments to the list.
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> Inputs are appreciated before 24th April 11:00am (GMT).
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> Thanks & Cheers
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> Bala’zs & Jouni
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