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Re: [Detnet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08.txt

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Mon, 11 May 2020 19:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Detnet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08.txt
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Balázs,

Thanks!

Lou

On 5/11/2020 10:33 AM, Balázs Varga A wrote:
>
> Hi Lou/All,
>
> Changes were done. I have created a pull request on GitHub:
>
> https://github.com/detnet-wg/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model/pulls
>
> Changes:
>
> - Change of conformance language (as proposed below)
>
> - Removing editor's notes
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> - Fine-tuning security section
>
> Any further comments?
>
> Thanks
>
> Bala’zs
>
> *From:* detnet <detnet-bounces@ietf.org> *On Behalf Of *Lou Berger
> *Sent:* Thursday, May 7, 2020 12:12 AM
> *To:* detnet@ietf.org; internet-drafts@ietf.org; i-d-announce@ietf.org
> *Subject:* Re: [Detnet] I-D Action: 
> draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08.txt
>
> Authors,
>
> Thank you for this update.  Since this is an informational document, I 
> suggest you drop the new section 2.3 (requirements language) and lower 
> case the 2 instances where this language is used.  Also since the 
> sentence before says it is a recommendation "should" is more 
> appropriate than "must".
>
> Specifically:
>
> OLD
>
>    o  Names SHOULD be descriptive.
>    o  Names MUST start with uppercase letters.
>
> NEW
>
>    o  Names should be descriptive.
>    o  Names should start with uppercase letters.
>
> Lou
>
> (As shepherd)
>
> On 5/6/2020 8:32 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org 
> <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>     A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>
>     This draft is a work item of the Deterministic Networking WG of the IETF.
>
>              Title           : DetNet Flow Information Model
>
>              Authors         : János Farkas
>
>                                Balázs Varga
>
>                                Rodney Cummings
>
>                                Yuanlong Jiang
>
>                                Don Fedyk
>
>        Filename        : draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08.txt
>
>        Pages           : 22
>
>        Date            : 2020-05-06
>
>     Abstract:
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>         This document describes flow and service information model for
>
>         Deterministic Networking (DetNet).  These models are defined for IP
>
>         and MPLS DetNet data planes
>
>     The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model/
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>     There are also htmlized versions available at:
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>     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08
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>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08
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>     A diff from the previous version is available at:
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>     https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08
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>     Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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