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From: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
To: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>, "detnet@ietf.org" <detnet@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08.txt
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Hi,
Some further editorial changes were added to the existing pull request
(e.g., removing hidden text/notes from “xml”).
Cheers
Bala’zs

From: Balázs Varga A
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To: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>; detnet@ietf.org; internet-drafts@ietf.org; i-d-announce@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Detnet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08.txt

Hi Lou/All,

Changes were done. I have created a pull request on GitHub:
https://github.com/detnet-wg/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model/pulls

Changes:
- Change of conformance language (as proposed below)
- Removing editor's notes
- Fine-tuning security section

Any further comments?

Thanks
Bala’zs



From: detnet <detnet-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org>> On Behalf Of Lou Berger
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08.txt


Authors,

Thank you for this update.  Since this is an informational document, I suggest you drop the new section 2.3 (requirements language) and lower case the 2 instances where this language is used.  Also since the sentence before says it is a recommendation "should" is more appropriate than "must".

Specifically:

OLD

   o  Names SHOULD be descriptive.



   o  Names MUST start with uppercase letters.

NEW

   o  Names should be descriptive.



   o  Names should start with uppercase letters.

Lou

(As shepherd)
On 5/6/2020 8:32 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:



A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.

This draft is a work item of the Deterministic Networking WG of the IETF.



        Title           : DetNet Flow Information Model

        Authors         : János Farkas

                          Balázs Varga

                          Rodney Cummings

                          Yuanlong Jiang

                          Don Fedyk

  Filename        : draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08.txt

  Pages           : 22

  Date            : 2020-05-06



Abstract:

   This document describes flow and service information model for

   Deterministic Networking (DetNet).  These models are defined for IP

   and MPLS DetNet data planes





The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model/



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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08



A diff from the previous version is available at:

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-08





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