Re: [Detnet] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Alvaro,
Many thanks for the comments.
Actions inline marked with <BV>.
Cheers
Bala'zs

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Subject: Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04: (with COMMENT)

Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04: No Objection

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(1) References:  I don't think that RFC3209, RFC3473 or RFC4385 need to be Normative as they seem to be used mostly as examples.
<BV> OK.

(2) [nits]

s/reproduced from the [RFC8655],shows/reproduced from [RFC8655] shows
<BV> Fix done in "draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-05"

s/[RFC4385],can be used/[RFC4385], can be used
<BV> Fix done in "draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-05"

s/constraint on its size of/constraint on the size of
<BV> Fix done in "draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-05"

s/RFC5575/draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis
<BV> OK, I see rfc5575 will be obsoleted if rfc5575bis approved.