Re: [Detnet] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 20 February 2019 15:25 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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> On Feb 20, 2019, at 7:17 AM, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> wrote:
> 
> Hi Alissa,
> 
> Thanks for the comments - see below.
> 
> On 2/20/2019 9:54 AM, Alissa Cooper wrote:
>> Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11: Discuss
>> 
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>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> DISCUSS:
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>> = Section 6 =
>> 
>> "DetNet is provides a Quality of Service (QoS), and as such, does not
>>    directly raise any new privacy considerations."
>> 
>> This seems like a false statement given the possibility that DetNet may require
>> novel flow IDs and OAM tags that create additional identification and
>> correlation risk beyond existing fields used to support QoS today.
> 
> Based on the other work in the WG, I think "is not expected" is more accurate than "does not". This is based on the WG solutions for the DetNet data plane using existing IP (v4 or 6) headers or MPLS labels for flow identification.

If that is the case then the references to new flow IDs and OAM tags should be removed from the architecture.

> 
> Would changing to "is not expected" address your concern?

Combined with the above removals, that would work for me.

Thanks,
Alissa

> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Lou