Re: [Detnet] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Wed, 20 February 2019 15:21 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Hi Alissa,

Thanks for the comments - see below.

On 2/20/2019 9:54 AM, Alissa Cooper wrote:
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> = Section 6 =
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> "DetNet is provides a Quality of Service (QoS), and as such, does not
>     directly raise any new privacy considerations."
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> This seems like a false statement given the possibility that DetNet may require
> novel flow IDs and OAM tags that create additional identification and
> correlation risk beyond existing fields used to support QoS today.

Based on the other work in the WG, I think "is not expected" is more 
accurate than "does not". This is based on the WG solutions for the 
DetNet data plane using existing IP (v4 or 6) headers or MPLS labels for 
flow identification.

Would changing to "is not expected" address your concern?

Thanks,

Lou