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Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-03

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Wed, 16 May 2018 12:44 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: "Kiran.Makhijani" <Kiran.Makhijani@huawei.com>, János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com>, "norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com" <norman.finn@mail01.huawei.com>
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Thanks a bunch Kiran:

I saw no opposition so I made the chances in the bitbucket repo.

Take care,

Pascal

> -----Original Message-----
> From: detnet <detnet-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Kiran.Makhijani
> Sent: mercredi 2 mai 2018 21:51
> To: János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com>; DetNet WG <detnet@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-03
> 
> I have read and reviewed the doc. It is ready for publication.
> 
> Though it will help to clarify use of 'critical flow' in section 2,
>    2.  Support for critical packet flows that:
> Since it has no previous context or definition. Can we replace with
> 'deterministic flow'?
> 
> editorial nit, last line of section 3.1.
>    s/seu th epath up/set up the path
> 
> -Kiran
> On 5/2/18, 9:31 AM, "detnet on behalf of János Farkas" <detnet-
> bounces@ietf.org on behalf of janos.farkas@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
>     Dear All,
> 
>     This starts a two week Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on
>     draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-03.
> 
>     The WGLC ends on May 16.
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>     ready for publication", are welcome!
>     This is useful and important, even from authors.
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